I am not freakin happy dude. I think that I got snubbed. Everybody said that my paper was great and i feel as i was cheated. I am going to cry man. Its not fair, but anyway my NHD was very good because I got it done and was very fun to write.
My paper was 1501 words and was very well written. If i had to made it to cities I would of had to edit some corrections and rearrange my partagraphs. The judge Dr. Thomre said that it was very disorganized so I would fix that around. My paper discussed his early life, his family, and his impact on the Civil War.
My paper Abraham LIncoln's Impact on the Civil War was a very well written paper that should of made it to Cities and then to states and maybe NATIONALS but no I got snipped of it. I think that I should of went on to cities but good luck to everyone who is going.
Monday, January 26, 2009
Thursday, December 11, 2008
15th Annotation
Wright, Peter Civil War Battles Copyright 2007 12/9/08
http://www.civil-war.net/
From this website I got all of the information I need to talk about the battles during the civil war. I can use this information to make a part in the paper.
http://www.civil-war.net/
From this website I got all of the information I need to talk about the battles during the civil war. I can use this information to make a part in the paper.
14th annotation
Christiain, Robert "Abraham and the Civil War " Copyright 2008 12/11/08
http://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88/abe-brigade.html
This website can be very useful for my paper. It talks about the minority in the war. I can use this information if I want to talk about the races in the war.
http://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88/abe-brigade.html
This website can be very useful for my paper. It talks about the minority in the war. I can use this information if I want to talk about the races in the war.
13th Annotation
Jacobs, Chris Abraham Lincoln, Copyright 2008 12/8/08
http://www.mrlincolnandfreedom.org/inside.asp?ID=27&subjectID=3
From this website I got very good information to use in my paper. I can talk about Abrahams civil war victory and how it changed the world. This will be very helpful.
http://www.mrlincolnandfreedom.org/inside.asp?ID=27&subjectID=3
From this website I got very good information to use in my paper. I can talk about Abrahams civil war victory and how it changed the world. This will be very helpful.
12th annotation
Bateman, Derek Abraham Lincoln, Copyright 2006 12/5/08
http://www.historyplace.com/civilwar/
From this website I got some good information about the battles during the civil war. It talked about the date that the battles took place, who was leading the battles, and how many casualties there where for each battle. I can use this in my essay to talk about civil war information.
http://www.historyplace.com/civilwar/
From this website I got some good information about the battles during the civil war. It talked about the date that the battles took place, who was leading the battles, and how many casualties there where for each battle. I can use this in my essay to talk about civil war information.
11th annotation
Marsen Tony Abraham Lincoln, Copyright 2007 12/11/08
http://www.civilwarhome.com/lincolnbio.htm
From this website it talks about the civil war expierence of Abraham Lincoln. It talks about his war leaders and why he chose them as his leaders.
http://www.civilwarhome.com/lincolnbio.htm
From this website it talks about the civil war expierence of Abraham Lincoln. It talks about his war leaders and why he chose them as his leaders.
Tuesday, December 9, 2008
annotation's 9 & 10
9. Charles Francuis Adams, Abraham Lincoln, Copyright 2008, 12/5/08
http://library.thinkquest.org/3055/netscape/people/lincoln.html
From this website I got a good view of Abrahams opinion on the civil war. The website has like a timeline of his life but only on events that happened throughout his years.
10. No Author, Abraham Lincoln, Copyright 2002 Pagewise, 12/5/08
http://www.essortment.com/all/abrahamlincoln_rrzw.htm
This website gave me an outlook at the civil war. It taught me who won the battles and when they were fought. It will help my paper when I talk about historical information on him.
http://library.thinkquest.org/3055/netscape/people/lincoln.html
From this website I got a good view of Abrahams opinion on the civil war. The website has like a timeline of his life but only on events that happened throughout his years.
10. No Author, Abraham Lincoln, Copyright 2002 Pagewise, 12/5/08
http://www.essortment.com/all/abrahamlincoln_rrzw.htm
This website gave me an outlook at the civil war. It taught me who won the battles and when they were fought. It will help my paper when I talk about historical information on him.
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