published essay (pog 2)

There are two reasons why I am right this essay because it is the best essay I wrote so far in this school. I feel real confident about the grading rubric will prevail and give me a good grade. Another reason why I chose to write this essay is because I think that my opening and closing paragraphs are good. They really tell and sum up what I writing about.



John
U.S Constitution
Period 1/2

Philosophy of Government (POG 2)

Doing things such as calling your friends with your mind and getting places without waiting. They are both things that you can do with the iChip. People could take advantage of the iChip, and hack into peoples computers. Then President Young passed a bill that only citizens over the age of eight-teen would receive an iChip. The Constitution does effectively protect U.S citizens liberties because during the iDeal society there was a press conference to declare a citizens freedom of speech, the right to a fair trial, and the right to pass a bill.
In article 1 section 1, the Constitution states that all citizens have the right to speak their mind and Shay stated that. She told the President and I quote " I am going to blow up your house." That made a very big ordeal with President. That made him very made him very scared for his life, so Shay was imprisoned. Any body who threatens the life of the President will be jailed at that very minute and she was. She did something about it.
Shay Miller was very upset that her first amendment was violated, so she demanded her right to a fair trial. The Constitution states that any citizen guilty or not guilty has the right to a fair trial, and that is just what Shay did. Shay did exactly that. Shay won the right to her freedom and she won her case. The Supreme Court Justices ruled in favor of Shay and was released from jail. If it wasn't for the first amendment Shay would probably still be in jail for threatening the life of the president.
During the iDeal society the citizens the citizens where trying to pass many bills, but only one was passed. The bill was that only citizens under the age of eighteen would not receive an iChip. A bill could only be made a bill by going thought many steps. First, it has to be approved by the House of Representatives, and then go through the Senate. Then if they approve it will be passed by the President or otherwise vetoed. In the iDeal society case the bill was passed and now only adult get the iChip.
In conclusion, the iDeal society does effectively resolve citizens liberties by all of my key points. When something was going to happen, there was always something to balance it out. So, the iChip will now only go in adults brain. Do you think that it is a good thing ? You tell me !